




HOW I CAME TO WRITE ‘THE BUTCHER’S DAUGHTER’, Richard Godwin.
‘The Butcher’s Daughter’ was originally published at A Twist Of Noir
One long Summer I unwittingly rented a villa off a Mafia lawyer in the heart of Sicily. It was bakingly hot, over 100 degrees all the time and I was in the interior. It is a strange and beautiful country steeped in bloodshed.
Olive groves shimmer in a constant haze and the Mafia still run the place. The teenagers are well behaved because they are too scared not to be.
One night I was eating out in a small and extremely good restaurant when three men, who were too sharply dressed for the area walked in, brushed the manager aside and went through to a back room behind a curtain.
You get the picture, all in expensive suits, the heavy, the good looking son, the lawyer with glasses and the papers in his case. It used to be called the Pizza connection. Hanging out the wash.
The landscape and the entire place left an imprint on me.
A few days after I returned Berlusconi was deposed.
Bernardo Provenzano, otherwise known as Il Tractore or The Tractor for his brutal methods, was known as the Cappo di Tutti and was arrested at a farmhouse near where I was staying.
He had been on the run since 1963. He was hard to find since he had no mobile phone, no computer, and communicated by pizzi which means a bird dipping its beak in the water. It is also a piece of paper which he would write on and fold up until it was no bigger than your small fingernail. He used a Bible code the Italian police are still trying to crack and he would write his orders on his pizzi.
They would go out in his laundry bag. He was found in a farmhouse with a ricotta machine and some red wine. You will smell lemon groves as you drive through the countryside. The Mafia started out exporting lemon and bergamot.
The interior of Sicily is steeped in history and Sicilian itself is incomprehensible to most Italians, being a mix of many languages including the languages of their invaders.
I remember going out for a drink one Saturday night. The local Piazza was lined with old men on wooden chairs drinking Grappa. No women, and I felt I was not in the twentieth century.
The interior of Sicily is a strange place. Go there and you will never forget it.
I never heard another word of English spoken during my entire time there. And I have never seen so many dead dogs rotting by the roadside, the Sicilians just run them over.
Richard Godwin is a crime and horror writer as well as a produced playwright. His stories have been widely published in magazines such as A Twist Of Noir and Pulp Metal Magazine. His works in print include ‘Chemical’, published in the Anthology Back in 5 Minutes (Little Episodes Publishing 2010), ‘Doll’, published in Howl: Tales of the Feral And Infernal (Lame Goat Press 2010), 'Face off' in CrimeFactory Issue #5 (CreateSpace 2010), 'Pike N Flytrap' in Needle Magazine (Lulu 2010) and 'Mother' in Tainted Tea (Lulu 2011).
His crime novel ‘Apostle Rising’ is out and can be bought at all good bookstores and online at Amazon and here http://www.blackjackalbooks.com/order Go to his site to watch a video trailer for ‘Apostle Rising’ and visit his blog for his Chin Wags At The Slaughterhouse, which are the interviews he conduct with other authors


because I wanted to read it again. Hawkes no longer seems to be writing books. A shame because I know I liked this one.

"How I came to write this book"
The inspiration for THE HANGING WOOD, the fifth in my series of Lake District Mysteries, came from my increasing fascination with sibling relationships. As an only child, I’ve often found the ways in which brothers and sisters inter-act together to be slightly mysterious. In the past, I never found it easy to imagine what that kind of relationship would be like – but of course, one of the joys of being a novelist is that it gives you the chance to stretch your imagination in fresh directions.
A question I asked myself was what it would be like if your brother or sister disappeared, and was never found again. What if the commonly held view was that a relative had murdered the missing child – but you didn’t accept that was true? What if you clung to the belief that your sibling was still alive?
In the story, Orla Payne has never been able to come to terms with the idea that her older brother Callum was murdered by their uncle, who then committed suicide. The body was never found. She meets Daniel Kind, the historian, and when she confides in him, he urges her to talk to DCI Hannah Scarlett. But then a shocking tragedy occurs.
The book is set in the Keswick area of the Lake District, one of the most beautiful places in Europe. Much of the action takes place in a tightly-knit community surrounding old Mockbeggar Hall – there is a farm, owned by Orla’s father, a caravan park where her mother used to live, a residential library, where she has been working, and the Hanging Wood of the title. The library, by the way, was inspired by a real-life library in North Wales – St Deiniol’s Residential Library, a magical place built by a Victorian Prime Minister and full of atmosphere; it was also the setting for the launch of my last Lakes book, THE SERPENT POOL.
This story develops the slow-burning relationship between Hannah Scarlett and Daniel Kind, and as well as exploring family connections, it is also concerned with the nature of justice. ‘Don’t you care about justice?’ Orla asks Hannah. Of course, Hannah does, but she finds that few things are harder in life than making sure that justice is truly done. I really enjoyed writing THE HANGING WOOD and I hope that enjoyment is very evident to the people who matter most – my readers.
Martin Edwards is the author of two series, set in Liverpool and the Lake District. At the CWA Daggers Awards 2008, he received the award for best short story of the year for 'The Bookbinder's Apprentice'. The eighth Liverpool book, Waterloo Sunset, and The Arsenic Labyrinth,(shortlisted for Lakeland Book of the Year 2008) have both recently appeared in paperback. So has Dancing for the Hangman, a novel about Dr Crippen. The fourth Lake District Mystery, The Serpent Pool, was published in February 2010.


HOW I WROTE THIS BOOK by Anonymous-9
Synopsis of HARD BITE, the novel
The hit-and-run driver took everything—his wife, child and legs. Now a paraplegic, Dean Trahearn unleashes payback on suspected hit-and-runners in Los Angeles. Helper-monkey Sid is his deadly assistant as a satisfying conglomeration of dirtbag-corpses piles up. Until Dean kills an innocent man by mistake. The revelation is agonizing—just as the Mexican Mafia figures out that his first murder victim was one of them. Carnales kidnap Marcie, his home-visit nurse, so Dean uses himself as bait—armed with only Sid, his wits, and a last chance at honor—to save Marcie.
How I Wrote the Book
Terry Pratchett said, “You need the darkness to let the light show up.” Triumph of the human spirit enthralls me, so I made my main character disabled, with a limited amount of life left, and burning with ambition to avenge his own hit-and-run accident. The big challenge? Making him a serial killer. Dean had to be human and sympathetic enough that you’d actually care about him, not just watch at a distance and wait for him to get caught. Obviously, this is a razor’s edge of writing, a very fine moral line, and each reader will decide if I pulled it off or crashed.
I decided Dean would follow a vigilante code of honor, and I delved into the code of the bushido plus “the officer and a gentleman” credo to get a handle on it. I got so into Miyamoto Musashi, the original badass samurai, born in 1584, that I started waking up and writing every day at 4am, just like he says he did, in the preface to THE BOOK OF FIVE RINGS. However, I didn’t stop bathing, like he did. I tried, but it was hell on my social life.
If the book doesn’t make enough money to buy me a private island with servants I don’t know what I’ll do. Probably write another one, I guess.
Check out my website www.anonymous-9.com. I’d love to hear from you.
Thanks for this forum, and the invitation to write, Patti!





table. I wore them both out long ago. The first MURDER INK, the Mystery Lover's Companion, was published in the seventies and
the second MURDERESS INK followed a bit later.
I like to read while I eat. Lately I've been working my way through David Thomson's enormous Biographical Dictionary of Film at lunch time. Thomson is the most interesting and entertaining flm critic since Pauline Kael--and every bit as frustrating. When I disagree with him, I want to call him up and read him his rights--before violating every one of them.

How I Came to Write (and Publish) this Book, Grant Jerkins
A Very Simple Crime started out as a vignette—just two or three pages of narrative.
That tiny seed actually sprouted several plants. One branched out into an eighty thousand-word novel. Another shed its leaves and became a feature-length screenplay (a version by me alone as well as a version written by two other people.) What ended up being published was a short, fifty thousand-word novel—my favorite draft, and the one most often condemned by publishers as being too dark and having no likable characters.
That vignette (now the first half of chapter one) was simply a retelling of an incident from my childhood. Getting lost in the dark. My bedroom was in the basement of our house, and one night I got up to go to the bathroom. I didn’t bother to turn on the lights because I knew the way upstairs. I’d made the trip a thousand times before. That night though, I grew conscious of the pitch darkness of the basement and became disoriented. I got lost. I had a little panic attack and just stood there and screamed my head off until someone heard me and turned on a light. It was just one of those weird experiences we all have as kids.
Sometime after writing that down, my mind returned to it and latched onto the idea of a man who was never able to escape the darkness, that it infected every aspect of his life. And Adam Lee was born.
To that memory of being lost, I added a punch line (the second half of chapter one.) What if on the other end of that black night the boy grew into a man, and that man was on trial for murder? And in switching from remembrance to fiction, I found that I wanted to know what happened to that man in the intervening years, what had brought him to this accusation of murder. Was he guilty or innocent? (I didn’t know.) But mostly, I wanted to know what the boy who became the man would find at the end of that dark path. Would he, at long last, emerge into the light? Would Adam Lee have a happy ending? Did he deserve one?
I ended up with a short novel that I thought was fairly good—that I believed captured something that others might find compelling. The New York publishing community disagreed with me. Repeatedly. Ad nauseum. Over and over I heard the words, “It’s too dark.” At one point I turned the book into a screenplay, certain that this would be the key to my success. Hollywood, however, was likewise unimpressed. Ad nauseum. So I added thirty thousand words to the original manuscript (let in a little light, so to speak) and set my sights back on New York. Still no go.
Ultimately, it took over a decade to find a publisher. I was delighted when I heard that Penguin’s Berkley Prime Crime imprint wanted to publish the book. The final punch line to this odyssey was a good one. The last twist, the surprise ending, was that my too dark, too mean-spirited, and too twisted crime novel was put out by a publishing house known primarily for their line of cozies.
Lillian Jackson Braun and I have the same editor. Go figure.
