Patti Abbott chooses:
"Graveyard Shift" by James Reasoner; "The Long Silence After" by Ed Gorman
Browsing in the Dawn Treader bookstore in Ann Arbor in January, I grabbed a book from the shelves entitled HARD-BOILED. It was an anthology published in 1995, edited by Bill Pronzini and Jack Adrian, and published by Oxford University Press. I took it home and was delighted to find stories by two of our most faithful reviewers, but that isn't why I'm choosing these two stories today.
Although the stories are quite different, they share a theme: men attempting to redress the loss of a wife through criminal action. Though the outcomes are different, both stories are rich in atmosphere, tension, and character and a quality I love: uxoriousness. They rise above many short stories that depend almost totally on plot. Within a few pages, we know these men---or think we do. I highly recommend both stories as primers on how to write a short story as well as stories to be enjoyed.
John McAuley chooses:
One of my favorite *forgotten* short stories is over thirty years old and runs less than 300 words. It's also a song. And a few years ago was riffed into an anthology by some well known writers.
The story/lyrics. Bruce Springsteen - Meeting Across The River Lyrics - Meeting Across The River - Lyrics On Demand
The record track. [As much as I like Springsteen's live performances I've chosen the studio version directly from the album.]
The book. http://www.authorstevehamilton.com/books/book-meeting-river.htm
Ed Gorman chooses: "Babylon Revisited," F. Scott Fitzgerald
Charlie Wales returns to Paris hoping to gain custody of his young daughter Honoria. Charlie was in no shape to take care of her when her mother died seven years ago. He was an alcoholic who spent all his time in the fashionable bars and restaurants of the glittering city.Ed Gorman chooses: "Babylon Revisited," F. Scott Fitzgerald
Honoria has been raised by her aunt, a woman who despises Charlie for the way he treated his wife--much like Scott and Zelda, they battled a great deal--drunkenly locking her out in the snow one night not too long before she died. While there is no real connection between what he did and her death both the sister and Charlie are burdened with it--she in rage, Charlie in grief and remorse.
In the course of the story Charlie revisits some of the bars where he once drank along with his rich American friends and the more successful of the expatriate colony. But the world-wide Depression has changed everything. The bartender has a grim story for every name Charlie brings up. Death, madness, loss of fortune. The glamor of Paris is no more just as Charlie is no more, not the charming, glib, handsome Charlie of old anyway. He is now a frightened alcoholic trying to rebuild his life, limiting himself to one drink a day. He hopes.
At his sister-in-law's, while Charlie is trying to present himself as a responsible man these days, a couple he knew from the golden days burst in. They are loud and giddy and silly in their drunken folly. For them the heyday of the city has never ended. They've remained rich. Charlie sees in them the man he once was and is disgusted. He runs them out of the house. But to no avail. His sister-in-law insists on keeping Honoria. Charlie is in no condition, so tentatively sober, to take her.
Charlie ends up looking for the silly couple he ran out of the house. He sits at the bar with an empty glass in front of him. One drink a day. He's had his ration. Or so he tries to convince himself. But as night crowds in will he be able to control himself after his failure to get custody of his daughter?
You don't have to be an alcoholic to understand this story but it doesn't hurt. I quit drinking thirty-five years ago after fifteen years of living inside a bottle. But even after all this time I recognized everything Charlie is going through. Not a day goes by when I don't cringe at something I did in my bottle days, a cruel word or argument or fight. I'm haunted just as Charlie is.
The terrible beauty of the story is its portrait of a man who must face the world sober and is overwhelmed by it. He is weak and fragile man and in the two scenes with his little girl we see a man very near the crack-up Fitzgerald himself would have a few years after writing the story. The weight of these moments is crushing, for the girl and for Charlie Wales alike.
The gloom of the Depression is familiar to us today. Charlie's world is crumbling--and so is the world around him. Sitting in the bar with his empty glass, fighting off the desire to have a second drink, we have a portrait of Fitzgerald's last years. Hard to imagine that he'd be dead in his early forties. Even harder to imagine that he died with all his books out of print, forgotten by many, even mocked by a few. In his journals you find the following line : "Ernest (Hemingway) speaks with the authority of success; I with the authority of failure." If you look past the self-pity of that remark you see its irony. Hemingway's "success" has not worn well (except for the short stories) while Fitzgerald's "failure" is all too contemporary.
More forgotten stories at:
Juri Nummelin
Sandra Seamans
James Reasoner
David Cranmer
Kerrie Smith
Bill Crider
Terrie F. Moran
George Kelley
Scott D. Parker
Craig Clarke
Eric
Paul Brazill
Ray
Martin Edwards
Cullen Gallagher
Charles Gramlich
Randy Johnson
Jeff Pierce
Todd Mason
Clair Dickson
Joe Boland
And a book from Michael Carlson
9 comments:
If only I had time to read all these wonderful stories, none of which I've read before!
Thanks for organizing such a great feature.
Me, too. And thanks for participating!
Thanks for the kind words regarding "Graveyard Shift", Patti. I hope you'll do another short story edition sometime in the future. I already have several candidates in mind.
Finding all of them might be tricky, as well. Sadly.
Yes, we should do one every three or four months. Forces us to take those anthologies and magazine off the shelves again.
"Graveyard shift" is great. I agree that other short story versions of Friday's forgotten books would be wonderful.
Hmm...you know, folks, nothing is stopping you from highlighting anthologies and collections on a regular basis. Writes the man who's done about three novels, maybe five, and all the rest have been compilations...
Glad to see you putting your oar in again, Patti.
Either is great, Scott. And yes, we could highlight collections anytime, Todd.
Patti, have you seen the short film based on Graveyard Shift.
here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TU3oD3TQ9Vs
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