Read and enjoyed. Great stuff.
Thanks for submitting the story Patti. It's one of my favorites of yours.
Very well done. Harsh and unforgiving.
Thanks, guys. I excised it from the novel in stories. Two rapes of teenaged girls seemed excessive
wow, patti. i agree with stephen. harsh and unforgiving is right. i once ran into a pack of soulless teenage boys like that. completely lacking in humanity. you captured that perfectly.
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Read and enjoyed. Great stuff.
Thanks for submitting the story Patti. It's one of my favorites of yours.
Very well done. Harsh and unforgiving.
Thanks, guys. I excised it from the novel in stories. Two rapes of teenaged girls seemed excessive
wow, patti. i agree with stephen. harsh and unforgiving is right. i once ran into a pack of soulless teenage boys like that. completely lacking in humanity. you captured that perfectly.
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