After a spurt of thunder storms in our area (always disconnect the computer so it doesn't blow up along with all my stories) I finally got a chance to read your story. Great as always. I was wondering though, is this going to go into a longer version? I can almost see her taking over Sigrid's life.
Sandra-Actually it was part of a novel in stories I tried to do last year. And I've had a million endings over time. In some, the girl doesn't die, in some, he has the upper hand by the end...I do think the nonappearance of Sigrid is a letdown so if I did it over...Thanks for your thoughts--as always.
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