Wednesday, November 06, 2024

Short Story Wednesday: "The Best of Everything" Richard Yates

 (from the archives)

Richard Yates wrote two of my favorite novels, REVOLUTIONARY ROAD and THE EASTER PARADE, but he also wrote this fabulous collection of ten short stories (among others). Written in the fifties "The Best of Everything" almost seems like a story written earlier. Were people in their twenties this naive? This innocent? I have to assume some were.

It is the story of a couple on the day before their marriage is to take place in Atlantic City. The point of view switches between the two of them and you can't help but notice how drastically different they are from each other once you are in their heads. You also realize they don't know each other at all and that their marriage will probably fail quickly. 

The woman is a typical middle class young woman working as a secretary. She speaks well and is respected in her office. The man is a step or two down the socioeconomic ladder and has a poor grasp of English, which the woman's roommate makes her constantly aware of, calling he and his friends, "Ratty little clerks." 

But for whatever reason, Grace goes forward with the marriage plans although we sense her worry. Her roommate, feeling badly about the things she has said about Eddie, leaves her alone the night before the wedding and Grace plans an early consummation, feeling this will set things right.

But Eddie has been the man of the hour with his friends at a bachelor party and he is stunned by their good will. You get the feeling he has never been the center of attention before this night. He hurries to Grace's apartment to tell her he is going back to the party and her attempt to seduce him goes to naught.

We understand now that Eddie will always choose his friends over his wife and that will destroy their marriage quickly. She goes so far to put his hand on her naked breast. Nothing.

There is a lot of discussion online about this story. One teacher said it was the cause of a female student in his class dumping her boyfriend. Yates' real gift here is capturing the mind and language of both characters so clearly and with sympathy. Eddie is not a bad man and Grace is not a snob, but they certainly don't belong together. They seem to have reached an age when they believe it is time to marry no matter to whom. 

 

George Kelley 

TracyK 

Kevin Tipple 

Todd Mason

14 comments:

Todd Mason said...

Naivete will always be with us. Consider the recent results, when it has been coupled with incomprehension, and unconcern, and a fair amount of spite.

Margot Kinberg said...

It sounds like the story has a lot of depth, for all its a short story. I can see the similarities, too, between the themes in Revolutionary Road, and this one.

Jeff Meyerson said...

As I'm sure I said last time he came up, I'm a big fan of Yates and his work. Of course I've read this collection, as well as several of the novels (including the two you mentioned) and a biography.

Currently reading: I'm nearly done with MURDER MOST CONFEDERATE, edited (in 2000) by Martin H. Greenberg. George reviewed this a couple of weeks ago. Very good collection with some favorite writers.

Someone mentioned the new book by Lydia Davis, which reminded me that I had a few of her short story collections (very short shorts, for the most part) yet to read, so I got CAN'T AND WON'T (and a later one) from the library. Her stories are very short, ranging from a paragraph (even one sentence) to a few pages. Good writer.

Speaking of George, he reviewed a new collection by Barry N. Malzberg, which reminded me to get his COLLECTING MYSELF: THE UNCOLLECTED STORIES, which I will be reading with the other collections.

And I have the collection of Lee Child stories waiting for me at the library.

Diane Kelley said...


Richard Yates is an underrated short story writer. Diane just wants to curl up on the couch and watch a HALLMARK movie after the dismal Trump victory.

Jeff Meyerson said...

George, Jackie feels exactly the same way.

pattinase (abbott) said...

I am going to the movies. By myself because I don't want to talk about it. A documentary about Alfred Hitchcock. Being alone is too much today.

Todd Mason said...

This helped me this morning: The election-eve AFTER MIDNIGHT, which I had missed, is a good one (as you might already know, if you let the video run through the "menu" page after every segment, it segues into to the next segment...though you might want to keep an eye out for the "skip" button on the YT ads, after they run for a few seconds...) Rhys Nicholson, Rekha Shankar, and Paul F. Tompkins are the guests. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lMEf6BcEB8E&list=PL-cwa6ZvflaB_A_iDGgIWxwxwoyNl94eo

Jeff Meyerson said...

We got our new refrigerator delivered this morning, so spent time transferring everything from the old - as in 30 years old - to the new. Now the super is taking the doors off the old one (the doorways in this building are not that wide) to dispose of it for us. Then we'll go out for a steak lunch.

Todd Mason said...

Our similarly aging fridge is reaching its end...what model did you choose?

TracyK said...

I keep vowing to stop acquiring new short story books and then I hear about new authors, new stories (to me).

I don't think I have read anything by Yates.

Jeff Meyerson said...

Todd, got a GE. Almost got a Frigidaire but it was a little small for us. This is not one of those huge ones, but big enough.

Todd Mason said...

Thanks. After getting burned by our Miele dishwasher, all input is welcome.

Todd Mason said...

Abstinence is no fun in this regard.

Todd Mason said...

Thanks for the add!