Sunday, December 14, 2008

Instrument of Their Desire on Beat to a Pulp

Thanks to David Cranmer for making me a part of his new venture--Beat to a Pulp.

13 comments:

Sepiru Chris said...

Patrica,

That is a fantastic story. I'm blown away and my heart is pounding.

Chris

debra said...

Wow, Patti, I am amazed by your incredible story. Thank you so much for sharing it.

Lisa said...

The story had me enthralled from the start. It is the kind of story where I devoured every word and then I kicked myself for getting to the end. So I read it again and took my time the second read through. What a terrific story.

Charles Gramlich said...

Extremely good story. I was hooked quickly and the intensity built very well across the whole tale.

pattinase (abbott) said...

Thanks to all of you for these kind comments. It means a lot to me coming from you.

Paul D Brazill said...

Very smashing. (i read 'A Philadelphia Story', which, like this, pretty much ticked all the short story boxes for me.)

pattinase (abbott) said...

Thanks, Paul.

r2 said...

I just read it. What a great story. I wanted to hate the brother so much and then the story took a twist. Nice work.

Barbara Martin said...

Great story, Patti.

Randy Johnson said...

Loved the story. Didn't see that ending coming.
Thanks for the good read!

pattinase (abbott) said...

Thanks Randy, Barbara and R2. You've very kind.

Dana King said...

Wow. What an exceptional example of how an understated story can have more emotional impact than something purple.

Congratulations.

pattinase (abbott) said...

Thanks so much, Dana.