Sunday, December 14, 2008

Instrument of Their Desire on Beat to a Pulp

Thanks to David Cranmer for making me a part of his new venture--Beat to a Pulp.
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13 comments:

Sepiru Chris said...

Patrica,

That is a fantastic story. I'm blown away and my heart is pounding.

Chris

8:48 PM
debra said...

Wow, Patti, I am amazed by your incredible story. Thank you so much for sharing it.

10:27 PM
Lisa said...

The story had me enthralled from the start. It is the kind of story where I devoured every word and then I kicked myself for getting to the end. So I read it again and took my time the second read through. What a terrific story.

1:30 AM
Charles Gramlich said...

Extremely good story. I was hooked quickly and the intensity built very well across the whole tale.

3:00 AM
pattinase (abbott) said...

Thanks to all of you for these kind comments. It means a lot to me coming from you.

7:29 AM
Paul D Brazill said...

Very smashing. (i read 'A Philadelphia Story', which, like this, pretty much ticked all the short story boxes for me.)

12:03 PM
pattinase (abbott) said...

Thanks, Paul.

12:13 PM
r2 said...

I just read it. What a great story. I wanted to hate the brother so much and then the story took a twist. Nice work.

1:39 AM
Barbara Martin said...

Great story, Patti.

3:18 AM
Randy Johnson said...

Loved the story. Didn't see that ending coming.
Thanks for the good read!

7:05 AM
pattinase (abbott) said...

Thanks Randy, Barbara and R2. You've very kind.

7:27 AM
Dana King said...

Wow. What an exceptional example of how an understated story can have more emotional impact than something purple.

Congratulations.

1:29 PM
pattinase (abbott) said...

Thanks so much, Dana.

2:22 PM

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