Patrica,That is a fantastic story. I'm blown away and my heart is pounding.Chris
Wow, Patti, I am amazed by your incredible story. Thank you so much for sharing it.
The story had me enthralled from the start. It is the kind of story where I devoured every word and then I kicked myself for getting to the end. So I read it again and took my time the second read through. What a terrific story.
Extremely good story. I was hooked quickly and the intensity built very well across the whole tale.
Thanks to all of you for these kind comments. It means a lot to me coming from you.
Very smashing. (i read 'A Philadelphia Story', which, like this, pretty much ticked all the short story boxes for me.)
Thanks, Paul.
I just read it. What a great story. I wanted to hate the brother so much and then the story took a twist. Nice work.
Great story, Patti.
Loved the story. Didn't see that ending coming.Thanks for the good read!
Thanks Randy, Barbara and R2. You've very kind.
Wow. What an exceptional example of how an understated story can have more emotional impact than something purple.Congratulations.
Thanks so much, Dana.
Patrica,
ReplyDeleteThat is a fantastic story. I'm blown away and my heart is pounding.
Chris
Wow, Patti, I am amazed by your incredible story. Thank you so much for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteThe story had me enthralled from the start. It is the kind of story where I devoured every word and then I kicked myself for getting to the end. So I read it again and took my time the second read through. What a terrific story.
ReplyDeleteExtremely good story. I was hooked quickly and the intensity built very well across the whole tale.
ReplyDeleteThanks to all of you for these kind comments. It means a lot to me coming from you.
ReplyDeleteVery smashing. (i read 'A Philadelphia Story', which, like this, pretty much ticked all the short story boxes for me.)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Paul.
ReplyDeleteI just read it. What a great story. I wanted to hate the brother so much and then the story took a twist. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteGreat story, Patti.
ReplyDeleteLoved the story. Didn't see that ending coming.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the good read!
Thanks Randy, Barbara and R2. You've very kind.
ReplyDeleteWow. What an exceptional example of how an understated story can have more emotional impact than something purple.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations.
Thanks so much, Dana.
ReplyDelete