Read and enjoyed. Great stuff.
Thanks for submitting the story Patti. It's one of my favorites of yours.
Very well done. Harsh and unforgiving.
Thanks, guys. I excised it from the novel in stories. Two rapes of teenaged girls seemed excessive
wow, patti. i agree with stephen. harsh and unforgiving is right. i once ran into a pack of soulless teenage boys like that. completely lacking in humanity. you captured that perfectly.
Read and enjoyed. Great stuff.
ReplyDeleteThanks for submitting the story Patti. It's one of my favorites of yours.
ReplyDeleteVery well done. Harsh and unforgiving.
ReplyDeleteThanks, guys. I excised it from the novel in stories. Two rapes of teenaged girls seemed excessive
ReplyDeletewow, patti. i agree with stephen. harsh and unforgiving is right. i once ran into a pack of soulless teenage boys like that. completely lacking in humanity. you captured that perfectly.
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