Tuesday, November 14, 2006

The Old Ice Down the Back Stunt

If anyone is out there, please check out my story on Demolition. See side bar for link. Thanks.

5 comments:

  1. Read and enjoyed. Great stuff.

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  2. Anonymous12:07 PM

    Thanks for submitting the story Patti. It's one of my favorites of yours.

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  3. Very well done. Harsh and unforgiving.

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  4. Thanks, guys. I excised it from the novel in stories. Two rapes of teenaged girls seemed excessive

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  5. wow, patti. i agree with stephen. harsh and unforgiving is right. i once ran into a pack of soulless teenage boys like that. completely lacking in humanity. you captured that perfectly.

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