tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post8317355463854049220..comments2024-03-29T05:18:51.551-04:00Comments on Patricia Abbott (pattinase): A HISTORY OF WHAT HAPPENED. Grant Jerkinspattinase (abbott)http://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-89875353653493208202011-03-02T03:07:04.395-05:002011-03-02T03:07:04.395-05:00I thought I was completely through with the word a...I thought I was completely through with the word app- you made it new again. Nice work, a well constructed story.R L Kelstromhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11080532716601038457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-59064839714629754982011-02-28T21:06:21.930-05:002011-02-28T21:06:21.930-05:00Keith, can't believe you were over at all, muc...Keith, can't believe you were over at all, much less by 400. I have to reread Glenn's story. I'll say why when I comment on it.Grant Jerkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03716473051079915219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-57166168225792089842011-02-28T19:37:18.479-05:002011-02-28T19:37:18.479-05:00Very cool. Great writing.Very cool. Great writing.Glenn Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14925047417101856802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-46209203921574362652011-02-28T13:23:25.977-05:002011-02-28T13:23:25.977-05:00Sweet story, Grant. And so far I don't think a...Sweet story, Grant. And so far I don't think anyone has hit the word count, right (I over shot mine by 400)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06827652636843928373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-11472525031844919592011-02-28T13:09:09.268-05:002011-02-28T13:09:09.268-05:00I am so admiring of people who can use technology ...I am so admiring of people who can use technology well in a story and set it in an unusual setting. Very nice indeed.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-25699515327493597992011-02-28T12:08:33.407-05:002011-02-28T12:08:33.407-05:00Thanks r2. I overshot the 800 word limit. This was...Thanks r2. I overshot the 800 word limit. This was a fun challenge.Grant Jerkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03716473051079915219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-82918819756055632042011-02-28T10:57:25.315-05:002011-02-28T10:57:25.315-05:00Excellent. I love the line: He wanted to rip that...Excellent. I love the line: He wanted to rip that taunting eyebrow right off her smug face. Perfect description of a couple coming apart.r2https://www.blogger.com/profile/15050444327059086880noreply@blogger.com