tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post2246384015946885271..comments2024-03-29T03:14:14.401-04:00Comments on Patricia Abbott (pattinase): Flash Fiction Challenge, Frank Jr. pattinase (abbott)http://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-49359949309908499932012-09-25T07:36:34.042-04:002012-09-25T07:36:34.042-04:00Patti - This is absolutely fabulous! Your story is...Patti - This is absolutely fabulous! Your story is remarkable; it's going to stay with me. AJ - terrific strong character. Thanks you guys!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-60326463671026757732012-09-24T20:34:43.756-04:002012-09-24T20:34:43.756-04:00Interesting story, Frank, told with a great deal o...Interesting story, Frank, told with a great deal of humor. I think we've all met someone like Frank, Sr., at one time or another. And he sang exactly like I do!Jerry Househttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09482856733981933159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-2472189662516897572012-09-24T19:50:23.391-04:002012-09-24T19:50:23.391-04:00Thanks to everyone who wrote or read about Frank J...Thanks to everyone who wrote or read about Frank Jr. pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-75679416746011990392012-09-24T19:06:43.645-04:002012-09-24T19:06:43.645-04:00As usual, Patti, you took your story where no one ...As usual, Patti, you took your story where no one else would think to go, and did it beautifully. It's rare for me to sit back after finishing a flash piece to digest it--there's not usually time to strike that kind of chord--but you managed again.<br /><br />AJ, excellent portrayal of a hard case who may have been beaten up by life, but not beaten down. I'd be interested to see where this might go.Dana Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01350344882342624735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-25764489784968960652012-09-24T18:26:32.723-04:002012-09-24T18:26:32.723-04:00Loved your story, Patti. It has real staying power...Loved your story, Patti. It has real staying power.<br /><br />And a good twist on the biter bit theme, A.J.<br />Jerry Househttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09482856733981933159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-58090874861703229832012-09-24T15:35:51.523-04:002012-09-24T15:35:51.523-04:00I liked it.I liked it.Gerardnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-46601942292011519572012-09-24T14:16:22.659-04:002012-09-24T14:16:22.659-04:00Beautifully written, Patti, as always. And you pac...Beautifully written, Patti, as always. And you pack a lot of twists into a thousand words.<br /><br />Cool and cryptic, A.J., with lots of great lines!Evan Lewishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07620731784654779358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-81265092849384854092012-09-24T13:39:57.892-04:002012-09-24T13:39:57.892-04:00Missed the call for this completely, sorry. Lookin...Missed the call for this completely, sorry. Looking forward to reading the stories.Rob Kitchinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05567424969308636082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-88444760489025996042012-09-24T11:58:36.887-04:002012-09-24T11:58:36.887-04:00A bold story, Patti and well told. I'm sorry I...A bold story, Patti and well told. I'm sorry I don't have an entry for Frank Jr. flash fiction. Prashant C. Trikannadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16079354501998741758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-17248661981383517242012-09-24T10:41:32.495-04:002012-09-24T10:41:32.495-04:00Great character--always love your short fiction.Great character--always love your short fiction.YA Sleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12371132883359264412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-73723887672177861682012-09-24T10:19:34.884-04:002012-09-24T10:19:34.884-04:00Nice job, Patti. Very good.
Jeff M.Nice job, Patti. Very good.<br /><br />Jeff M.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-12302104938426859802012-09-24T09:54:54.180-04:002012-09-24T09:54:54.180-04:00Thanks, guys. Got it, Jerry. Thanks, guys. Got it, Jerry. pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-78862029554084591082012-09-24T09:23:18.878-04:002012-09-24T09:23:18.878-04:00Very dark and very fine.Very dark and very fine.Al Tuchernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-81142063136520067562012-09-24T09:02:05.860-04:002012-09-24T09:02:05.860-04:00I have one up now, Patti.I have one up now, Patti.Jerry Househttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09482856733981933159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-560267195627807522012-09-24T08:55:27.677-04:002012-09-24T08:55:27.677-04:00Great story and challenge. No writing time for me ...Great story and challenge. No writing time for me today but I'll benefit from others' work.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.com