tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post224333464796882704..comments2024-03-28T08:51:47.164-04:00Comments on Patricia Abbott (pattinase): A LOU FORD STATE OF MIND, Christopher Grantpattinase (abbott)http://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-42250489013290453952011-11-16T15:36:35.186-05:002011-11-16T15:36:35.186-05:00THAT was fun. Tight, terse, not a word wasted. A...THAT was fun. Tight, terse, not a word wasted. A glimpse into the mind of depravity, calm, cool, and collected, and bat shit crazy. I've missed ya, Lou...Joe Cliffordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00292903377618770678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-15193803771194063782011-03-05T22:06:35.938-05:002011-03-05T22:06:35.938-05:00"Wish she hadn't said that." you rea..."Wish she hadn't said that." you read that and you just know nothing good's gonna come on from here out. I had a line from an old, old song in my head after that. <i>"When, at last, the police came by, her gruesome deeds she could not deny. For to do so she would have had to lie. And lying she knew was a sin, a sin, lying she knew was a sin."</i> Too bad for the Russian she didn't know it was a sin, a mortal one at that. That's Grant. Christopher Grant. CoolAJ Hayesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-47191339719812163802011-03-04T19:22:25.819-05:002011-03-04T19:22:25.819-05:00A great title and a great story. I agree with Chri...A great title and a great story. I agree with Chris R., Thompson would be proud. <br />Terrific job, Christopher!Kathleen A. Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02067969207174384793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-54201453708344514262011-03-04T13:37:04.696-05:002011-03-04T13:37:04.696-05:00Brilliant opening line that draws you into a multi...Brilliant opening line that draws you into a multi-layered story. It is hard to do achieve layering with flash and you achieve it admirably Christopher, this is tight crime writing at its best as you would expect from the man at ATON.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-57520002037518994302011-03-01T22:22:20.814-05:002011-03-01T22:22:20.814-05:00Yuck! But in the best possible way. I can really s...Yuck! But in the best possible way. I can really see the teeth and used condom sharing space in his pocket.R L Kelstromhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11080532716601038457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-80628948111369981732011-03-01T08:00:33.230-05:002011-03-01T08:00:33.230-05:00Cracking story and I agree, a pocket full of white...Cracking story and I agree, a pocket full of white teeth is a terrific line. Great story CG; my hat is doffed to you.Alan Griffithshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-21233569634927406292011-03-01T01:08:56.084-05:002011-03-01T01:08:56.084-05:00Great, tough prose. Wonderful story.Great, tough prose. Wonderful story.r2https://www.blogger.com/profile/15050444327059086880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-35797760833682494562011-02-28T21:17:08.951-05:002011-02-28T21:17:08.951-05:00You know you're going to have write more... Wh...You know you're going to have write more... What's he going to do next? Helluva set-up, knock-out writing.R.S. Bohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-74450779572993351712011-02-28T19:26:18.224-05:002011-02-28T19:26:18.224-05:00Nasty nasty. Nice job, Chris!Nasty nasty. Nice job, Chris!Glenn Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14925047417101856802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-64406630301879292042011-02-28T17:56:50.991-05:002011-02-28T17:56:50.991-05:00It's that pocket full of white teeth that seal...It's that pocket full of white teeth that seals the deal. Great story.Katherine Tomlinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696623795926663895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-74252159277800942342011-02-28T17:52:53.849-05:002011-02-28T17:52:53.849-05:00Nasty!Well done!Nasty!Well done!Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-62795516870955449442011-02-28T13:02:09.406-05:002011-02-28T13:02:09.406-05:00Several Russian pros turning up today.
Nicely done...Several Russian pros turning up today.<br />Nicely done, CG.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-88888427551149661872011-02-28T12:05:18.600-05:002011-02-28T12:05:18.600-05:00Ha ha, Lou Ford returns. Enjoyed this one.Ha ha, Lou Ford returns. Enjoyed this one.Grant Jerkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03716473051079915219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-35657455738617940052011-02-28T10:39:29.166-05:002011-02-28T10:39:29.166-05:00Great story! Thompson would be proud.Great story! Thompson would be proud.Chris Rhatiganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05769089157184374652noreply@blogger.com