tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post3463038681612672065..comments2024-03-18T23:00:34.076-04:00Comments on Patricia Abbott (pattinase): Flash Fiction Stories: Sweet Dreamspattinase (abbott)http://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-59142350897164742482010-05-06T07:59:01.939-04:002010-05-06T07:59:01.939-04:00you know what i liked best? it's what i alway...you know what i liked best? it's what i always like about your stuff. patience and payoff.Kieran Sheahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16681787953865476304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-12795757306011756912010-05-04T02:41:00.042-04:002010-05-04T02:41:00.042-04:00Creepy and funny. Perfect combo! Loved the governm...Creepy and funny. Perfect combo! Loved the government bit.R L Kelstromhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11080532716601038457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-74098502941059402982010-05-04T00:38:20.407-04:002010-05-04T00:38:20.407-04:00What's that they say about red-headed stepchil...What's that they say about red-headed stepchildren? And what does Kimmy eat, her brother's leftovers? Creepy story and I mean that in the best possible way.Katherine Tomlinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696623795926663895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-6519900864415966602010-05-03T20:49:18.398-04:002010-05-03T20:49:18.398-04:00I feel justified for slacking on my stats' stu...I feel justified for slacking on my stats' studying after this one. What a <i>chilling</i> ending.Loren Eatonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12488412683340389286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-17120089450217853062010-05-03T18:34:14.806-04:002010-05-03T18:34:14.806-04:00Thanks. I'm gonna throw you guys the chain.Thanks. I'm gonna throw you guys the chain.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-27962392254116876022010-05-03T18:27:45.645-04:002010-05-03T18:27:45.645-04:00That's cold. I like it.That's cold. I like it.Dana Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01350344882342624735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-5632864130967003752010-05-03T17:51:43.881-04:002010-05-03T17:51:43.881-04:00You keep on getting better, Patti. I want to know ...You keep on getting better, Patti. I want to know your secret. Excellent work.Ed Gormanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06126267358266480356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-7376849040861402332010-05-03T16:48:26.460-04:002010-05-03T16:48:26.460-04:00Nice work. "Gov't handouts." Heh. An...Nice work. "Gov't handouts." Heh. And you giving me a hard time about my pun...Richard Proschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08314680709014254183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-72517277238488302662010-05-03T16:42:04.018-04:002010-05-03T16:42:04.018-04:00r2..
I loved this story. When I got to the end I ...r2..<br />I loved this story. When I got to the end I had to go back and see where everything fit..nice work. And thanks for your comment on mine.Sandra Scoppettonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00149336752789641751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-71296630617949450322010-05-03T16:36:07.067-04:002010-05-03T16:36:07.067-04:00Wonderfully funny. And creepy. I think our protag...Wonderfully funny. And creepy. I think our protagonists are cousins.Sandra Scoppettonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00149336752789641751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-47108531719392428742010-05-03T16:32:12.047-04:002010-05-03T16:32:12.047-04:00That was a fine piece of fiction. Got to love that...That was a fine piece of fiction. Got to love that red head's logic.Ron Earl Phillipshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12170233782050167504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-9278065686320141132010-05-03T15:38:17.748-04:002010-05-03T15:38:17.748-04:00Randy,
You got that one like some Halo-version of...Randy,<br /><br />You got that one like some Halo-version of a nail-gun.<br /><br />Patti,<br /><br />A nice bit of darkness, though please don't get offended if I won't get into a car with you, ever.Cormac Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02990698766444728760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-43220123207954644382010-05-03T15:37:32.008-04:002010-05-03T15:37:32.008-04:00Caught this late, as usual. Of course I'm new ...Caught this late, as usual. Of course I'm new to this group of deviants, so maybe I'll raise my hand and say "Me, me."<br /><br />The theme immediately gave me a story idea. Hope I executed it well enough in the time I took.<br /><br />http://www.ronearl.com/between/2010/05/on-the-sly-flash-fiction/Ron Earl Phillipshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12170233782050167504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-79733981010161158042010-05-03T14:54:38.011-04:002010-05-03T14:54:38.011-04:00You do realise that no-one is ever gonna fix your ...You do realise that no-one is ever gonna fix your car, right?Rob Kitchinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05567424969308636082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-30607100686359158182010-05-03T14:10:15.483-04:002010-05-03T14:10:15.483-04:00I'll do another in the fall, Todd. Start think...I'll do another in the fall, Todd. Start thinking--Phil says start with the line, "It seemed like a good idea at the time." We have a bet on whether he will remember it in September. <br />Thanks everyone.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-21141546069936776872010-05-03T14:05:47.010-04:002010-05-03T14:05:47.010-04:00R2- cracking ending. Patti, you DID suprise me wit...R2- cracking ending. Patti, you DID suprise me with this one. Loved it.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-59948107564373168652010-05-03T13:11:02.611-04:002010-05-03T13:11:02.611-04:00And, clearly, Tiny likes fresh.And, clearly, Tiny likes fresh.Todd Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01815516018079824802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-39449137412724821702010-05-03T13:01:30.882-04:002010-05-03T13:01:30.882-04:00Cool...I've been meaning to join in on this on...Cool...I've been meaning to join in on this one, and might eventually...but various matters have kept me from joining on time...thanks for the challenge and posting the results.Todd Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01815516018079824802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-20714721359130291542010-05-03T12:21:36.582-04:002010-05-03T12:21:36.582-04:00I just posted mine--
EricI just posted mine--<br />EricIrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18078694505194875348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-74334689305412037132010-05-03T11:59:41.683-04:002010-05-03T11:59:41.683-04:00Many thanks.Many thanks.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-87534464395255840702010-05-03T11:46:14.086-04:002010-05-03T11:46:14.086-04:00Wild. Demented. Wonderful.Wild. Demented. Wonderful.Evan Lewishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07620731784654779358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-19530856045885539292010-05-03T11:32:33.830-04:002010-05-03T11:32:33.830-04:00oh my.oh my.Richard R.http://brokenbullhorn.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-22721192750625811132010-05-03T10:46:42.662-04:002010-05-03T10:46:42.662-04:00Fast food noir and redneck cannibals. Both great ...Fast food noir and redneck cannibals. Both great stories r2 and Patti!WellesFanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16063771443019228190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-35548819811860361272010-05-03T10:29:40.593-04:002010-05-03T10:29:40.593-04:00Oh, Patti, that last line was so great!! wonderfu...Oh, Patti, that last line was so great!! wonderful flash!<br /><br />And R2 what a great ending, loved it!sandra seamanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09786095189231150008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33110302.post-90149180777632136472010-05-03T10:29:32.049-04:002010-05-03T10:29:32.049-04:00That was great--I'm still grinning. Perfect st...That was great--I'm still grinning. Perfect story!YA Sleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12371132883359264412noreply@blogger.com