You tell a mean story, Patti. "Threads from his uniform were found deep in her throat. She was clutching his left eye" had my imagination running. I definitely liked that!
Patti - What a terrific story! You really captured the feel of the minor league scene and of the mascot's life. I love it!
I like it. Short but pointed.Jeff M.
Another home run.
Very fine!
He looked at her curiously, wondering if you could remove a personality as easily as a costume.Gold there. And such an interesting viewpoint character.
A major league story about the minors!
You are too kind!
You tell a mean story, Patti. "Threads from his uniform were found deep in her throat. She was clutching his left eye" had my imagination running. I definitely liked that!
ReplyDeletePatti - What a terrific story! You really captured the feel of the minor league scene and of the mascot's life. I love it!
ReplyDeleteI like it. Short but pointed.
ReplyDeleteJeff M.
Another home run.
ReplyDeleteVery fine!
ReplyDeleteHe looked at her curiously, wondering if you could remove a personality as easily as a costume.
ReplyDeleteGold there. And such an interesting viewpoint character.
A major league story about the minors!
ReplyDeleteYou are too kind!
ReplyDelete